Filed under: Just Bored!
Hey hey… long time no post.
So, I just cut and paste what I have created last 2 weeks… a draft LYRIC for a song…. Haha… anyone wanna compose the music for me? It’s not a Pop… It should sound a bit groovy with sexy female vocalist… something like Amy Whinehouse or Alanis Morisette. Anyone interested to buy the copyright??? Yuhuuu….
LOVE IS A FOOL
Lyric by: Yenny Heriana
I have tried to dispose you
In a trash full of left out barbeque
But funny you always come back
Into my kitchen cabinet
Preparing for another wreck
O, my love is so so crap!
You, I have strived hard to hate you
With all the strength remain to forget you
But funny you never move on
Hiding behind my closet door
Wheeling and dealing with no call
O, My love is just a doll
Ya ya ya…
Loving you is such a fool
CHORUS:
So why should I
Still be thinking of you
[Crying for you]
[Praying for you]
So let me let you go…
Cos I love you with all my soul
Then just keep the memories rock and roll
And pretend we never make the knot
You, I have waited for chances
To tell you I’m tired playing this game
But funny I can’t say a word
When my eyes are locked into yours
Drowning and then killed in misery
My love is tragedy
# Back to CHORUS
Cos I love you…
I Love you with all my strength
Then just keep the memories packed in can
And pretend we are just good friends
Ya ya ya….
Loving you is such a fool
Ops,.. nothing personal there? Just some lines…
So, how’s that? Any comments and critics? Is it a dinner or still a dessert?
Hallooo…??
YeHa - 01.05.08
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great lyric, this song hav no repetition lyric.. keep it up ahso! ganbatte.!
Tommy 05.22.08 @ 8:56 pmIt’s the main course
Try to sing it and post it on youtube!
KaT 05.24.08 @ 2:40 amWOOWWOOOWEEWOOOW>..
IT’s NICE, I LIKE…(borat voice over)
Mcass 05.26.08 @ 4:44 amHahahaha,… Thanks buddy… Although it sounds a bit like a poem, huh!!!
Yenny 05.26.08 @ 6:01 amOh.. and it supposedly to be ‘Is it a dinner or still a dessert?’
Not a desert.. huahahah…. forgive my fingers…
Yenny 05.26.08 @ 6:05 amyes, sing it and post it on youtube!
lise 05.26.08 @ 10:15 pmwe’ll be waiting for the youtube link .. lol
Abi 06.19.08 @ 10:43 amanyway, youtube kena banned already by indonesian jack ass government…
Del 07.07.08 @ 2:30 amdinner or dessert? analoginya familiar ya? Dari music and lyrics, perhaps? hahaha.. menurut gue, masih dessert seh.. karena.. IMHO, bagian keduanya (setelah chorus pertama), koq rasanya aga mulai ga nyambung ya? ga ada feel kalo dirimu sedang menceritakan love is a fool… IMHo loh…
ESdoubleU-h-R 08.30.08 @ 2:42 am